You’ve gotten bitter baby, 6
But that’s okay 4
I’ve dealt with this feeling plenty before, 10
It makes no difference to me now. 9
I didn’t want you to leave, 7
But let me be honest, 6
You’re wasting your time with me here 8
I hope you know what they think of you, 9
Cause look baby, I’m thinking it too. 9
You’re playing them, 4
While she played you. 4
True love is dead, 4
But you’re just dying to be held 8
I hope you know what they think of you, 9
Cause look baby, I’m thinking it too. 9
You’re playing them, 4
While she played you. 4
If you cut me out, 5
Would that be easier 6
Than listening to you lie? 6
I hope you know what they think of you, 9
Cause look baby, I’m thinking it too. 9
You’re playing them, 4
While she played you. 4
I’ll let the darkness swallow me up, just for a little while longer
I don’t want you to leave,
But let me be honest,
You’re wasting your time with me here
I had bits and pieces written out on notes but to substantially write something more, I need to type, to bang my headphones in, get the right blood-flowing-song and write.
I intend on reading this one over and over again. I’ll finish it as much as I can, then read it over to add more life into it. It needs more description and feeling. I don’t want the characters to be flat, they need omph to be honest.
Ok, just wanted to say before it’s judged to harshly, haha.